Friday, October 16, 2009

"Flapping around on the street"

The first draft of a letter I needed in support of a project grant, the highlight of which is, "We will find a date to meet with you and discuss about the spot for the buildings." (Wait. What buildings?)

The second draft, the obvious highlight of which is, "Your project have brought change to our community and have help our young ladies to earn their own finance instead of flapping around on the street."

1 comment:

  1. Amazing. Wouldn't it be nice if people had their own initiative instead of asking others to give them stuff and and fix things - to see their own power and use it.

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